Good Effort

I can tell you worked hard on this. The idea wasn't really anything new so I didn't give style or graphics very high, and the sound wasn't great either. I gave you a two for humor because of the thing at the end though. Anyway, you have a typo in the word "Think", you might want to fix that. Good job regardless though.

Good Flash

It's very good for a first submission. I hope this one survives judgement, it's worth watching. Some advice though, make a loading screen and a play button, preferably not the newgrounds one but a custom one. Anyway, good job.